great story terrier

Okay so really cute! Blake and Tori's relationship was portrayed perfectly! Like how they tease each other.

I don't really see Tori crying out like that... I think she would be a bit more subtle.

Tori's last name is spelled Hanson. Not a big deal just thought I'd let you know :)

I really like this! I hope Chad doesn't come between Tori/Blake or vice versa!

Update soon :D

Tory

Oh my gosh, I loved that. I love how you brought in Chad and Marina to the beach where Tori and Blake were. I can see Cam getting excited about having that tape showing all the different ranger stuff and Tori watching it. I love the different things that you brought up in her research.

I love Tori/Blake and Chad/Marina, so it was really nice seeing the two in the same story. I think you did a really great job at keeping them in character. It was sad but happy about Chad and Marina. Although I loved the similarities you showed between Tori and Chad, not not in a bad way either.

This was just a really great story, and I absolutely love it. Great job.