I liked this story a lot! Well done!

Liked Wash's last line there. Most appropriate. And River's "fear is the mind killer" made me lol!

Very sweet, thanks for posting this here.

-Ellie

Very nice really enjoyed it

yah, rayney goodness.

I hope there is more story to come, enjoyed it very much.
Well done.

oh I love it!! So cute.

THank you

V!
xox

I absolutely adore the metaphor of Wash's words at the end...so good! Thank you so much for this fic...very intriguing!

FEAR IS THE MIND KILLER! Woo! I love Dune :) great use for it, great story!

Oh Wash, we miss you so. Anyway, back to the point. God dammit you write crazy well! beautifully done

Sarah x

YAY!! More stories from Lady Cleo! Your Rayne's are amongst my favorite fanfic.

Paradise indeed. Wow, when you come back, you come back wtih a Bang. I loved this. :)Ali

Yay! I like 'hidden-in-plain-sight' relationships!