AH SO SAD! tear :'( update soon!

This is very good, and well written. I like how you had Toph tell Aang of when he said he never killed anyone.

Excellent chapter! Everyone's so wonderfully in character and everything feels so natural! Kudos.
Can't wait for the next update :D

Yayayay! Another chapter!

I love it, so well written...

No... WHERE'S THE FLUFF?!? Lol, kidding.

Take your time of course *twitch twitch*

well that's sad the group split up and i feel sorry for Toph. anyway good chapter and update soon please!

Awesome awesome awesome.

I can actually picture the characters from the series when I read your dialogue. I think you've done an amazing job at capturing them.

Please keep writing!

great story

Whoot whoot! Another amazing chapter! Wow, I loved it, and everything just flowed...

Beautiful.

cool :) love the characters, and the interactions between them. i think you've managed to portray them really well.

more please :)

Very very good. Iwill review more when i am not so tired lol. Update soon!

Hey where's the update. I'm more than interested. I likie. I can't wait for an update. Come on, its too good to give up.

Nice work! You did an excellent job choreographing the scene. I could practically see them in my head going through the motions.

Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter.

Ooh, I like I like. I eagerly await the next chapter!
And thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for getting rid of that...thing growing on Haru's face. What were the artists thinking when they drew that on?

Huh, interesting concept.
I am curious to see what's coming next.

:>)

Interesting, I like it :D Keep up the good work :D