 Trissacar 2008-11-18 . chapter 1 Didn't think it was that funny. But keep writing! |
 Firechildfiredancerfireidiot13 2008-07-10 . chapter 1I started laughing at sentence one. By the second paragraph, tears were rolling down my cheeks and everyone thought I was crazy. Good Job. |
 ButterflyRae 2008-07-09 . chapter 1Cute story. :-) I'm glad that Ralph found someone. Weirdly, I always thought that somewhere along the line you were going to reveal that Marti was Martika and that she and Ralph would end up together after some drama with Derek not wanting that. I liked this a lot though. :-) |
 TheBucketWoman 2008-07-09 . chapter 1"...Titi turned to look at Ralph and her laughter stopped. He just looked so cute, practically folded in two from laughing. An attentive cameraman caught the American comic placing a hand over her heart and the soft look over her face..." So you know how I've been thinking about that all day and wish they'd hurry up and film it already? That and the kiss.
Beyond awesome. Mentioned it on LJ, but just had to bring it up here, too. |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-07-09 . chapter 1Oh my gosh this was so funny! The ending was awesome! I so knew that was gonna happen, but then you set it up perfectly for it to happen. I love your humor and you brought in Peanut and Jose the JalapeƱo. Boo-ya! I was watching them on Comedy Central the other day. LOVED IT SO MUCH! Get that epilogue up soon yeah?
~Chica~ |
 Moonlit-Jeannie 2008-07-09 . chapter 1So you already know what I think of this, but I just thought I would tell you on here too. I absolutely love it. Stand-up!Ralph rocks. Great job December, and I can't wait to read the next one again...even though, yeah. :) Great job. |
 Admiral Lily 2008-07-09 . chapter 1Ha! classic as usual. ;) |
 Shortie91 2008-07-09 . chapter 1HAHAHA I LOVED ALL 3 OF UR STORIES THEY JUST KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER I THINK THIS ONES THE BEST (JEFF DUNHAM KICK **'S) HIM AND RALF R MY FAVORITE COMICS KEEP IT UP : ) |