 SpacePirateGirl 2008-12-12 . chapter 1Okay, three things.
One, of course, your story ROCKED. :) I really enjoyed it, and LLxCC is the bomb. The ending was superb. Just letting us know she's alive, but not telling us too much--we still don't know she'll be okay. Great job! And Lelouch's emotions were really great; I could feel them myself! :D Awesome!
Second, English is my first language, and from reading this story... It's really true? English isn't your native language? No WAY! Well, I'd say you've clearly surpassed the Naruto fan-fiction writers if not a few of the Code Geass ones. And you've also clearly surpassed my knowledge of a second language--I'll never be as good at French or Japanese as you'll be at English. LOl, I'm jealous. :P :)
And last but not least, it says "Part 1," so you're updating right? (Dumb question; it says "In-Progress" at the top so I guess you are planning on updating. I just like to be sure, I guess.) And if you are going to update--sometime soon hopefully--how many parts are there going to be? Two parts, right? Because you said "two-shot." Of course, if you made a third, I'd review all three. :P
But anyway... I really better go to bed... And stop bugging my brother by hogging the computer. Bye-bye!! Update soon!
~Selena
P.S. Sorry for craziness, length, and any grammatical errors in my review. Sometimes it's not best to write things so late at night, but I guess I'll never learn. LOl, see ya! :) |
 KuroAngelique 2008-07-17 . chapter 1 you know... the one thing I really like when I read your story is that it's a bit angsty, but yet it again Lelouch can never get a happily ever after story (even though I wish him to)
this confuses me though, your story usually got at least 10 reviews so what happen here? I think because you put 'OOc Beware' in the summary many people have their doubts on reading it. Maybe if you erase that 'OOC Beware' from your summary, you'll get more reviews..
cause personally, I don't think Lelouch is OOc in the slightest... it's normal for him to behave that way...
update please! |