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xyz
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
ah! suspense suspense. thanks for sharing. i enjoyed reading this.
SpacePirateGirl
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Okay, three things.

One, of course, your story ROCKED. :) I really enjoyed it, and LLxCC is the bomb. The ending was superb. Just letting us know she's alive, but not telling us too much--we still don't know she'll be okay. Great job! And Lelouch's emotions were really great; I could feel them myself! :D Awesome!

Second, English is my first language, and from reading this story... It's really true? English isn't your native language? No WAY! Well, I'd say you've clearly surpassed the Naruto fan-fiction writers if not a few of the Code Geass ones. And you've also clearly surpassed my knowledge of a second language--I'll never be as good at French or Japanese as you'll be at English. LOl, I'm jealous. :P :)

And last but not least, it says "Part 1," so you're updating right? (Dumb question; it says "In-Progress" at the top so I guess you are planning on updating. I just like to be sure, I guess.) And if you are going to update--sometime soon hopefully--how many parts are there going to be? Two parts, right? Because you said "two-shot." Of course, if you made a third, I'd review all three. :P

But anyway... I really better go to bed... And stop bugging my brother by hogging the computer. Bye-bye!! Update soon!

~Selena

P.S. Sorry for craziness, length, and any grammatical errors in my review. Sometimes it's not best to write things so late at night, but I guess I'll never learn. LOl, see ya! :)
Skippy Sigmatic
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
Awesome, I loved it!
Felling
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Omg. Update or die. o_o
Pure Essence
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
aw... that made my heart squeeze! so sad!! But it's so good. Good job!
HimeHikari
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
*gasp* cliffhanger! I really enjoyed reading this. lelouch introspection is just beautifully done~ And I'm unsatisfied of the LelouchC.C attention fiven so I'm happy that you write this fic. I hope Sunrise don't do anything bad to this pair but knowing Sunrise (who have killed my favourite couple AsuCaga) I probably think I should just be prepared.

But if anything happens, I know I can count on you and read back all the LuluC.C centric fic that you've written.Keep up the good work!~
Shadow Rave
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
It's quite good. But you left me hanging which is not so good. Thou must correct this oversight! :P
KuroAngelique
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
you know... the one thing I really like when I read your story is that it's a bit angsty, but yet it again Lelouch can never get a happily ever after story (even though I wish him to)

this confuses me though, your story usually got at least 10 reviews so what happen here? I think because you put 'OOc Beware' in the summary many people have their doubts on reading it. Maybe if you erase that 'OOC Beware' from your summary, you'll get more reviews..

cause personally, I don't think Lelouch is OOc in the slightest... it's normal for him to behave that way...

update please!
Tsadde
2008-07-12 . chapter 1
Awesome story! but when does this start? after the end of the series? either way, please continue!
ccha
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
OMG I LOVE IT! PLZ REVIEW!!
its really exciting!
Kage of Seireitei
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
Yes it was a very tragic episode. I'm still a Lelouch x C.C fan but that episode kinda slapped me in the face. I'm not sure what to think anymore. sigh. I'm glad that this fic has great potential to be one of the best LelouchxC.C fics.
DT
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
OHMYGOODNESS, what a cliffhanger. Part 2 please. :D
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