 Threshie 9/8/04 . chapter 1Yay, a Celena POV poem! I like the rhyme scheme and rhythm here-the rhyming only seemed a bit forced on one line, but the rest impressed me. Poor Celena, to be deprived memories of Dilly-bishie...-Threshie
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 Fictatious 7/24/03 . chapter 1The meter is eccentric but the mood in this is very well worked. This does ring very true for so much everyone's life.
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 Izzy 8/8/02 . chapter 1 You really should think about becoming a poet. |
 Chesta in Z.you know the drill just tired cant be arsed signing in 10/31/01 . chapter 1 Lovely!(I sure use that word often) I like this, it's really nice, like it's pondering...I hope she remembers eventually, how can you ever forget him? |
 Hyzenthlay 10/30/01 . chapter 1 *applause* |