once again, nice description words, though still too short (start a new line every time someone says something, it makes it longer and easier to read), and a fantastic cliff-hanger, which can only be described by this: :O

Nice chapter! Good description words, surprise ending, nice action, funny, my only problem is that it was too short. That's it. But keep it up!

for God's sake, PLEASE stop writing with to or too "2" and you "u" and so on. this is supossed to be professional looking. this isn't AIM. I'm sorry, but I'm just telling the truth. Also, start a new line when somebody says something.