Yo should continue! I wanna read more of her having his children! =D

Ah!
The ending sentence was so sweet!


& That wasn't warm, that was hot!


:D

That was really amazing! I do think you should write more

Hah. The last sentence made me laugh. Good fanfic. :]

-Tauphe

I read it, so here's a review. Uh. I don't really have anything to say about it. But ppl like reviews, so.

Well, it was PWP, you warned me from the beginning.

*faints* Holy crap that was amazing! Great work! Pretty much in character and interesting to read!

This may seem like a dumb question, but...uh...what does PWP mean...?

BIG UPS! LOL

oh, WOW. First story you've written about Sweeney, that's amazing, I really enjoyed it! Wow, please write more...
and I need to give you cookies for this wonderful story...
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hope you like chocolate chip...XD

Nicely written ;) Your writing is so detailed its amazing..

(Dx may i ask what PWP stands for?)

hot! very hot! i liked it very much keep up the good work

I liked it a lot! It was funny reading the parts that you mentioned to me the other night. I like your use of accents cos it wasn't like...rediculous. :D I'm so ripping this line off from your first reviewer cos it's bitchin. I Lovett!

I like it!

Omg this was so hot...uh...yeah...*stares at sceen*

I seriously loved this, delicious or what? Wonderful job love and that last line was just the icing on the (very yummy) cake! ;)

OMG You should make a sequal in which she does get pregnant and sweeney freaks out, LOL! Poor toby. nice grammar not many mistakes with unbeta'd nice.

That was very good! Much better than my first sex scene! Write more stories!