Sorry it took so long to review. This story was amazing. It had me daydreaming about John owning a bar and Teyla on earth. I kept making Teyla do Duffy moves as she sang. This story really hit me. Thanks for witing it. :D

Oh, wow! Great story!

Wow. Great AU. I love John getting all possessive like that.

WOW! Absolutely WOW!

OMG - I loved this story, you set the scene perfectly and the intense feeling in those scenes were well done! You could really feel the emotional build up with John and Teyla! Great Story!

You certainly set a wonderful mood in this story and then ran with it. There was a great buildup to the intensity of both scenes. Simply excellent.

Wow...I mean wow! Definitely that time of night! Hot story!

That was amazing -- so delicious and sensual! Your words give such a vivid picture of the setting and the mood! Incredible, wonderful story!! Definitely one of my favorites!!

wow...that was just amazing. really, really well done!!

So THIS is where you have been! LOL Dude this was awesome. Easily envisioned were the smoky lounge scene and the players that inhabited it. Fabulous again dude.