Gosh that was so enticingly demented, just my thing. I absolutely loved that and I wish there was more to it, but you're right, this stands alone very well.

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Wow! this is amazing!

Very interesting idea...well written story too

T^T Aw! This fic made Nya cry! I'm very proud at how you prtrayed Kuronue and Youko-kun's love for eachother by making it an 'unending' bond which had already been ended.

Your story was very very good! Quite well writen. I like how your little conversation caused you to explore your hypothesis within this story. It was very good. the imagry was great! I could see it in my head. Though this chapter does indeed stand well alone I do hope you make another. I hope if you make another it consists of a more happy ending! T.T

Well, they've always said that if you ever actually hit the ground in one of those dreams where you falling towards the earth and you wake up just before the impact, then you'd be dead. The fact that you wake up from the dream is the only reason you're alive. I don't quite know who "they" are, but I suppose that's not exactly the point, now, is it? Beastly, story. I was glued to the screen all the way through. And the he died, and I was sad. Excellent fic... quite brilliant...

Well who WOULDN'T want to die whilst having sex with kuronue lmao, but still red the after note and thats slightly worrying :S i have a lot of death dreams, won't be sleeping tonight lol

I like it.

That was great ^^ I'm never really sure which paring I like best with Kurama, but there's something about this fic that makes Kuronue seem both adorable and creepy at the same time. Poor Kurama! Still, I'm sure he wasn't complaining too badly!
Wonderful fic, thanks!

i'm pretty speechless...um that was interesting and i enjoyed reading it. the darkness it had rocked!

Super creepy and really good, my favorite combination. Great job!

*Claps* wonderful.