Well...well that was just adorable.

But i do feel that the digimon got forgotten mid-way through...not that it's anything out of the ordinary :D

Cute, very cute. I really like the ending, but that sentence is a little confusing. After hiding there should be a comma, and also after them. ...Hiding, from anyone who would bother the, a boy and a girl kissing in the rain...

Anyways, I never really liked TK, and just now I decided to write a story about him. It has one sided Hikari-Takeru, but basically it is Takeru and a OOC. Anyways, it's more than fluff, more action.
Your story is the second one I read about this, and I'm really pleased. Keep it up.

Ireth.

wow! how sweet! I never knew Miyakeru (not sure if thats the right pairing title) could be so kawaii! Keep writing. D

Sweet... I think my favorite part was their noise-making on the stairs, though.

Aw ! So cute, it's hard to find stoires like these, GO MIYAKERU/TAKEYAKO *dancie*!

*meeps* That was absolutely adorable! I've never really even thought of that pairing, but it's so cute, ya know? *grins and adds to favs*

Gah! That was so good! I loved the ending, it was so sweet. I really like the idea, with the lights going out and proving just how different things can really be in the dark .
Anyway, keep up the good work.
-Morbidity

Awsome!

I've read this before, but realized I didn't review it!

I'm really more of a Kouyako fan, and really hope you right more of those, but anything with Miyako in it pleases me!

Tk is pretty cool, when Kari's not around.

EVIL KARI!

Excuse me.
You rock my socks!

Wong means King

One of the best Miyakeru/Takeyako fics out there. Though there seem to be less than about 10 of them on , it's still not only a small compliment. Hope to see more digimon (hopefully Miyakeru!) fics from you _

Bye

great job! Miyakeru is one of the best couples!

Nice... I like them as friends and a coulpe, even though I prefere Kenyako.

Good job! Takeyako is always nice, and this is a very original plot.
RobotMasterDusty gives it a
10/10

I read this awhile ago and I coulda sworn I reviewed it... Oh well.
This story was the best miyakeru story out there at its time, and did much to show the "light" so to speak, of this pairing. Definitely a great plotted one-shot, which is thankfully a decent length as well.

Between this, and lowriders one, I plan to try my own hand at a miyakeru. I doubt it will be any comparable to this... but well... anything is better then nothing eh?

I think your best line was Ichijouji Ken V 4.0, that was great.

A fun, believable story. Well written and a nice read. I don't usually like one-shots, but I think I might just put this one on my favorites page now. I have a Miyakeru story in the works myself, feel free to check it out if you're curious.

*purrs* I LOVE Miyakeru/Takeyako...they fit just in the nice right ways as far as I'm concerned. I wish I could write it...but I'd be comparing anything I did to *your* writing.)