 koorikaze 2009-11-08 . chapter 2Really awesome! PLEASE update, I'm dying to see what happens. Fang's kind of out of character BUT it's still really cool! Update... |
 EdwardFangLover888 2009-06-30 . chapter 2 UPDATE ?!
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Thankss. |
 if anyone knew i would 2009-03-09 . chapter 2oh em gee! This is so cool. i've never heard anything like this before (the whole fang losing his wings thing). please please please please update. |
 A. J. Jett 2008-11-14 . chapter 2Please update.
This is one of my favorites. ♥ |
 I'm Randomspicuous 2008-11-01 . chapter 2AWW!! i love it! so awesome!! sadly there was only a few stories that they had their wings cut off but I love this one!! please update!! *puppy eyes* |
 AJ Hawk 2008-08-24 . chapter 2keep updating! AH WHAT WILL HAPPEN? |
 ALovelyMeInside 2008-07-11 . chapter 2Ha, awesome. HeHe, Jeb*shakes head laughing*. Wow..."This is probably gonna be the most painful thing..." Jeez. Lay it on him like that why don'tcha? LoL. Update soon! |
 butterfinger45 2008-07-10 . chapter 2Oh, poor Fang. But, it's making a nice story plot!! I would never have come up with this idea, but it's great. You're a creative writer. Please update soon!:) |
 CJ 2008-07-10 . chapter 2 Great story. Update soon please. |
 dA bahd SpelLR 2008-07-09 . chapter 2interesting story line and i would like to see this idea developed into more detail, please? Like, it just seems that things are happening to fast and i would always picture Fang been more distraught over losing his wings, ya know? Any ways original idea, you get bonus points for that...and other than that nice set out and what not. Update soon please. |
 Baakthatsthenoiseachickenmakes 2008-07-09 . chapter 2guess what im reviewing! great story update soon! and keep writing.
IdGeyIdrEaMoFwIngS and her blue camoflauge chicken on roller skates |
 5253Racer 2008-07-09 . chapter 2wow that was good |
 Anon E. Mous 2008-07-09 . chapter 2 Pretty good, what I can read of it. More, please! |