beautifully written little things, please update more! ^^

QueenTiria

I'm a bit confused - isn't Spirit blue-eyed? O,o It doesn't really matter but I feel like I'm missing the point of this story by being led astray by those thoughts. xD

Anyway, this was the cutest little story ever! x3 Made me all squee-like and fuzzy inside. :3 These parts were especially cute: "The squishy baby with caramel-colored tufts of hair" ("squishy baby" is such an adorable collocation x33) and "struggling to focus on the gargantuan object" in respect to Spirit's face coming so close. xD Absolutely adorable, made me all warm and fuzzy inside, like I said. :3 And kind of sad that things turned out the way they did for this adorable family, sigh.

Yay! Can't wait for the next update on this story, or the TokiKake one~ x33

Aw. It might be a scrap, but it's a darling little scrap. It tugged at my heartstrings, it did. Thank you for sharing!

DA

loved it!! :) so cute

Loved it. And I expanded my vocabulary. How very like Maka to know a word like propinquity. You've got their characters down pat. Hope you drabble more. No objections to Blackstar, Tsubaki stories either. =) If you could also expand to Stein, Marie, it would be so squee.

Sap and cheese? A strange combination, but the way you wrote it was delicious. :)


^ An actual example of sap and cheese ^

O-oh my god. That was really cute!

You did a nice job. The scenario worked out perfectly and I could picture everything really well. You handled Soul particularly well. I thought the way you made him come across was just perfect, although I can't put it into words.

Oh goodness gracious, it's been a while since I've last enjoyed a Soul/Maka story as much. But it's only to be expected of your brilliance~ x3 I'm really curious that you had them not involved in any romantic sense in this story, even though they're still partners. That had me squee-ing in the end when he kissed her all the more. x3 My friend, you have such incredibly awesome notions for this pairing that I must bow before your writing genius~ *bows* I can't wait to see more from this story. :3

souls in denial!! LOL loved it~! so much SoMa fluff~ ^_^ keep up the good work!

aww that was cute!!;D
hope you'll write more!

That was adorably cute! And I love Soul's reaction at the end there - that wasn't romantic! I say denial! ;D

SO CUTE! I loved it :D

Great chapter! :D I love soulxmaka stories. <3

LOL.
I absolutely enjoy this. 8D
Continue ?

Hahahaha that was funny! yesh, post the Black Star drabbles, i wuv Black Star. X3