Gotta love Toph. Great story!

nice bet,keep it up

LOL. Don't say that a lot but when I do I mean it. Love the story. Make more like this.

i lovvveee this Toph is too vicous! she's my fave character. PLz read mi story "the beach house." i need some advice

Toph OWNS.

brittney

lol absolutely awesome!

Very lovely!

hehehehe! Toph so would do that! Good job!

I LOVED it! Absolutely loved it-all of them were perfectly portrayed. This won't be the last time I read this one, I can tell you now.

Oah, why don't we get to know what Zuko and Katara are "arguing about" in the woods? :P

that was realy cute!

i loved it

and you captured katara and zuko very well :]

katara seemed quite fiesty,

but then again if you get touchy with her that's how she always is.

it's bound to happen in the series haha :D

GREAT STORY!

You took the best of all the Avatar ships (Tokka and Zutara) and put them together into the BEST Avatar oneshot I have ever read. Ever. (And I've read a LOT of Avatar oneshots.) Bravo!

Everyone was in character, Katara and Zuko's fights were realistic, and Toph's smugness(if that's a word) was PERFECT.

All I have to say is: absolutely wonderful. Keep up the good work!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ugh, i hated it! no, lol. it was hilarious! i thought it was the prefect mix of sokkaxtoph and zukoxkatara!

Evil little Toph. Don't you just love it? Hehe. Meep!

I agree...

Smug Toph

lol

That was to good!