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| The Metronome Maven 2008-08-12 ch 6,  | abuseI love it totally and completely. Every chapter is done ridiculously well and I really really can't wait for an update, so please update soon. |
| hotflower901 2008-07-26 ch 6, | abusePoor Ianto. To be safe in Jack's arms would be heaven. Excellent chapter |
| gaia-x-goddess 2008-07-26 ch 6, | abuseAngst is good. This chapter was amazingly angsty, and very emotional. Well done :P X |
| Unsolved 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseI finally caught up with the chapters, I have to put this story on Alert. Well thank you for another great chapter, I love Angst Ianto too. Keep up the good work and Keep them coming. |
| doctor-who-fangirl 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseBrilliant. My favourite chapter yet I think. |
| mysterypoet66 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseIt's still going strong. Watch out for relying on established angst, go deeper. He may be a gorgeous angsty boy,( sigh) but remember: depression is rage turned inward. I really really really love the fact that you kept the motif so true to the events. *gives mocha brownie* |
| LadyAnalyn 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter, gotta love Angst!Ianto. TTFN |
| dirtgirl 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseoi gods! thank you so much I luv that chapter!! apologize to the other readers for messing up the order, but I bet you've enjoyed it too! that opening scene was fantastic - I think I'll start to talk to my coffe machine tomorrow AngstIanto was written very great, not to much, but very strong, I think. also great that you picked up that little coffee scene between Tosh+Ianto, it was very well fitting into the storyline of this chapter. and such a great H/C scene between JackIanto, certainly you deserve extra credits for that! BUT poor Ianto with his battered hands, Jack could have fetched the coffee himself (; seriously I love it and thank you again. |
| Mandination 2008-07-24 ch 5, | abuseAhahaha, that toast line cracked me up. I love puns. Great story, I love the twist of injecting coffee into every situation. |
| gaia-x-goddess 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abuseI can't believe this isn't on my alert, it's brilliant! X Well, it is now! |
| mysterypoet66 2008-07-22 ch 5, | abuseDefinitely lighter. :D Well done in keeping it hot without being graphic. I'm finding that many authors tend to over/underplay the Slashy bits, losing any sense of authenticity. Not too shabby. |
| hotflower901 2008-07-22 ch 5, | abusesexy and sweet |
| hotflower901 2008-07-22 ch 4, | abusePoor Ianto |
| LadyAnalyn 2008-07-22 ch 5, | abuseOh, I absolutely adore that chapter, it was fantastic! Well, if you're not going to let Gareth go, give him my regards. ;) TTFN |
| Le Cosmonaute 2008-07-22 ch 5, | abuseThat's a really great ending for the chapter, a good line. And the beginning was nice too. Okay, the whole thing was just wonderful. |