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Reviews for: The Evolution of a Fluke - Page 1 of 2
centuryshorty
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
so beautiful
BLACKWATER4EVR
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
oh, this was so sad.

but i loved it. Jake should be the one who comforts leah.
they are so cute together.
alexlovemetal
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
It was so sad but a beautiful chapter. And it's very well written. I really like it.
regencygirl13
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
BEAUTIFUL
trollz
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
pleasse put up another chapter im begging you
Violet Eliot
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
This is so sad. Poor Leah. At least she has Jacob.

Great fic! I love your writing style.
BlessedMay
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
My throats all choked up now. Poor Leah. Gosh, I feel so bad for her. *sigh*
kaitebug
2008-12-04 . chapter 1
i love jake and leah
Leiaaa
2008-09-13 . chapter 1
Please say you'll write more. This is amazing.
Dalyny
2008-09-09 . chapter 1
It's an amazing fanfic! I mean, JakexLeah is my favorite pairing, but this is over the top awsome! It'd be really cool if you wrote another chapter or somthin like that!
shafo94
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
That was good, it made my eyes tear up XD

There were a handful of grammar mistakes though, and those bothered me a bit ^^;
XxRandomHeartxX
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Love this! It really made me think through all Leah's feelings on everything. You're a great writer!
TopazEyesForever
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
Good but why is it an M? maybe mroe like a T
maximumfan
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
AW! I LOVED THAT STORY!! JEAH ROCKS! THAT WAS A GREAT FANTASTICAL AWESOME STORY! i would love to see more stories like that in the future!
MeTalkSmartOneDay
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
Wow! You can really write!!
This is all? I wish there was more!! But why is it rated M?
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