A great story. Very good.

I loved this. Period.

Wow! I think that was one of your stronger pieces... it was great without being too draggy, and I think it captured both characters very well. Though Caspian seemed a little too noble-sounding to me. Eh. Whatever.
I like it! More pieces like this!

I love your fic. because it has Susan start to doubt Narnia and Aslan altogether more like she did in the books than the movie.-can you tell I'm more of a fan of the books then the movies. although one criticsim you said that it was inspired by the newst movie,but more book based-I found it a hard to belive that the book version or even the movie version of Susan would throw herself at Caspian like your Susan did. but I digress I loved that fic please write more.

omg, that was so different, but amazing! ur writing style is exquisite and idk this story wasnt how i expected it to be, u had me guessing, that's for sure. its really sad how susan was hoping he'd marry her just to let her stay in narnia, but wow, caspian's reaction was not what i thought it would be. u had a nice take on things, awesome job. :)