 Dianna Cooper 2008-12-25 . chapter 1Another intresting story I cracked up with how bumblebee was freaking out about the upgrade. You would think he was getting a shot or something. |
 Nooburu Faita-Yuro911 2008-11-22 . chapter 1AWESOME STORY! CONTINUE! *w00t*
this is a well-written prologue
cant say it's original but much more promising
than the ohters stories though ^^
(sorry for those dudes and dudettes)
cant wait for the next one!! so I'll be
watching man! *thumb up* keep it up K
over and out |
 Blackcat842 2008-09-15 . chapter 1I can't wait for the next chapter !! |
 Raikimluva22 2008-09-10 . chapter 1DUDE DUDE DUDE-I LOVES ITS! XD tahahaz. UPDATES SOONZ PLZ!
-RKL22 |
 SanrioAnimaniacs13 2008-08-16 . chapter 1It's only the first chapter, but it's already getting good! Please update soon! =) |
 Fluteplayer08 2008-08-07 . chapter 1great chapter can't wait to read more |
 CheshireCatGrin3421 2008-07-28 . chapter 1this is rly good keep it going! |
 FlyingShadow666 2008-07-26 . chapter 1i really like it! please update as soon as you can! |
 BlueEyedAlchemist 2008-07-14 . chapter 1UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
It's really good |
 Lady Dragon010 2008-07-12 . chapter 1This is good. Man I wish I hade thought of that. Please continue.(Aqua Girl) |
 09CamaroChick 2008-07-11 . chapter 1Cool chapter! Bumblebee won't know what hit him!
Nice job on Black bee too! You should really write more Bumblebee stories. YOU ROCK!! :-) |
 Meirelle 2008-07-10 . chapter 1lol. Poor Bee. He's in for a shock. |
 Carebear1 2008-07-09 . chapter 1Oh lord, what has Bee gotten himself into this time? |
 Witch08 2008-07-09 . chapter 1that was good! i can't wait for the next chap, so update soon! |
 Crystal Persian 2008-07-09 . chapter 1YOU'VE GOTTA CONTINUE! IF YA DO, WILL BUMBLEBEE START TO LIKE SARI EVEN MORE THAN A FRIEND?! I HOPE SO! |