This story hasn't been updated, or added onto for quite a while. I stumbled onto it read it, and I love it. Please add more when possible. I would LOVE to read it.

That was really good. I am honestly crying that was so... sweet! I loved this chapter, now on to the next!

i usually go for m/a fics but this one was very well done. nice work

Damned virus! But thankyou for so skillfully filling in some gaps that the show completely ignored! You have such a beautfiul writing style. You're so expressive and your words flow and soothe like honey. I'm so glad you came back to this for a very much needed shippy update. I adore your work...always have. You're a genius with romance! Please don't stay away too long!

OMG! How do you make me cry like this!

this is so good i can't wait 4 more

this is really good, more soon

oh so beautiful! That was amazin, totally shippery!
I loved it!

::sniff sniff:: As always (and forever) this is wonderful stuff boo. Adding the part where Max told Logan about Ben was a good touch, it's been on the back of my mind that he knows Alec but now who Alec is, or looks like, or whatever. :) Good Luck tonight hun! -LC

Wow. Now those are the scenes we are missing so badly this season - even with the virus they could be giving us these kind of interactions.
I like the way you brought in the Pollo Loco conversation and I chuckled over the "entire stock of Lines'n'Things" line,

Please keep posting these - they are better than the character development (not) we're getting from
the show. :)

That is *so* good! I really wished that they had let us see the scene where Max tells Logan about letting the lab tech go. I like your version very much--and you managed to work in another scene I've been wanting to see--Max telling Logan about Ben. Write more!!!!! I love your work.

awwww thats sweet

Ahh how did I miss Chapter 2 ? I love this and hope you are going to write more for S2.
The phone conversation - that's what they need to be doing more of. These are the characters we came to love in S1 - not the angsty, mopey ones we've seen too much of in S2.

The old woman who lived in a shoe. What an inspired description of Max's life No wonder she feels tired at times. The fact that she would watch him from across the street underscores both her desire to be with him and the distance she feels she has to maintian because of her fear of hurting him. "So much has changed. Six months ago it was the numbness that was killing him. Now it’s feeling that’s killing us both." That line is the perfect description of the pain they are both feeling. Logan's dinner invitation and Max's response were so sweet. It was also an excellent lead in to the almost disastrous dinner that they did have. Despite both their desires for hope this chapter has really outlined how challenging their lives are right now.

You've heard it, I'm sure but still: You've got talent. Pleeeeease!!!Keep it up