eh, this seems like an IM chat. XD i didn't get half of it but it was still funneh! XD lol.-eevee rox

Hahaha! that's funny! maybe i have some tips for you...(first meeting with nanashi
nanashi: are you the chess no koma? you are going to hell

ginta(beats the shit out of him
nanashi flew towards dorothy's breast

nanashi: what babe!

dorothy: you... die you long haired perv! (beats nanashi's head)

Kind of awkward start... and I have a few suggestions that you can use... for future scenes

1. (in the underground lake
Ginta: Who the hell are you?

Babbo: Hi Phantom

Phantom(Wearing an I'm not Phantom shirt) I'M NOT PHANTOM! I'm... Tom...

Babbo: sure you are...

2. (out side of Reginrave
Phantom(Tom You see...

Peta(appears) Hello Phantom!

Phantom: God dammit Peta! You ruined the plan!

Ginta: Wait! You're Phantom?

Everyone else:...

Phantom: I'm leaving! (disappears
3. (Volcano battle field, Alan vs. Alibaba
Alibaba: you see there are strong rooks and pathetic worthless knights like Rolan

Rolan: I dare you to say that in my face!

Alibaba: Okay you're a wo(off screen and Rolan is beating up Alibaba and Alibaba is screaming in pain
Alan: Hey! knight chick! can I kill him now?

Rolan: fine...

4. (Before Hook vs. Snow
Rolan: how about you go Mr. Hook!

Mr. Hook: WHAT? YOU BITCH!

Rolan: just go... or do you want those pictures of you and kole
Mr. Hook: OKAY OKAY I'LL GO!

5. (Alviss vs. Rolan
Rolan: did I meet you some where?

Alviss: hmm...(3 second flashback
Alviss: yep

Rolan: by the way I'm actually a guy!

Alviss: what does that have to do with anything?

Rolan: I don't know...

That's all I have for now I hope to use them and be sure that you give me some of the credit!