Ahahahaha... oh so many analogies and metaphors. And then a complete and total lack of them.

... *fangs drop*

like this very hot strangly sensual write more-shattered

I like it i think it's cute. LOve this pairing xx

Wow ! Really great !

Now this is how the movie SHOULD have gone ;3 86 Scott Speedman's character altogether. Or better yet, they should have made his character female.

Few things are yummier than Kate Beckinsale in black pvc/latex, with those startling blue eyes *shivers deliciously* Talk about temptation.

Nicely Done.

This is awesome, love the way you write, good stuff.

That was good. You did a nice job of capturing Selene's emotions and inner turmoil. Just revise some of the run-on sentences in the beginning, and it'll be great!

*drools* hm... there isn't anything hotter than gorgeous hot britsih vampire chicks... hm I was just thinking that no one really mentioned who is was that turned Erika, and that that would be an awesome fanfic idea... *hint hint nudge nudge*

raven

loved it. :-)

Nice

I love it :). I've got their relationship, but you totally rock the smut for these two...Well done.

woo, wicked hot ;) and kind of cute

Ah, vampires, the personification of human sexual debauchery... Gotta love em!

I much preferred this to the bitter-sweet story you last posted in Underworld FanFiction... Made me sad. Thanks so much for posting another Selene/Erika with a different tone! I'd love to see more - the brutality of Selene's desires and Erika's utter submissiveness is just so enjoyable to read.

great story as always :)

there's too little stories of this pairing

WOW now that was a great story! i think that you should definitely write more Underworld femslash! there is not nearly enough of it out there and the stories you have written so far have been AMAZING!

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