Great story.

I never have liked Videl but if Gohan didn't marry her then the awsome Pan would have never been born. This story is pretty close to how how the situation would have been if Piccolo and Gohan liked each other.

That, was just magnificently heartbreaking, gods. I love quiet little moments of longing and pain like this, and it's just all the more powerful as it isn't resolved in the short time we spend with the story. Bueatiful, it made me tear up a little. I just love everything about it. I feel so badly for these characters.

How very sad. Well writen though, good job.

Very honest, I liked it very much