This was very, very good. Your prose is excellent, and fits well with Neji's voice (kind of understated and direct). In the end, the conclusion he reaches, while not entirely satisfactory, is pretty much the best anyone grieving can (to move on without completely letting go).

I feel like this is part of a much larger story, that you only allude to, that I don't quite understand. I can't figure out if Neji and Hinata were separated before she died (so the separation Neji refers to in the opening paragraph was not her death), and that's why Neji moved back to the main house and why he was alone in his bedroom, or if the separation was her death (putting the opening paragraph chronologically after the story (but then I don't understand why he would think she could return). However, it was still amazingly written.

Lovely.

Oh God, that was painful to the heart... *eyes tearing up*
It twisted my poor heart while reading the fic. God. It's so depressing. Especially the narration part. It seemed like Neji was writing a letter. God. It's just too painful. And I was listening to Utada HIkaru's 'Prisoner of Love'. God, the heartbreak. T~T

yipe. het. :3 you're awesome mama.