Really good.

Great writing! I love this one. Especially the ending lol. Cute. Good job. :)

Holy crap... I'm gonna go ahead and say that that was the most in character fanfiction I've ever read. Literally every piece of dialogue just fit their personality and relationship perfectly. Really fantastic writing. You executed their playful flirty banter so incredibly well... great job!

this is brilliant, it's almost like an actual extract from the script that we would have loved to have seen. Well done.

This is quite possibly the best Josh/Donna banter I've ever read! Their dialogue was spot-on: you've not only completely nailed their individual styles, but their personalities as well. And the whole scene itself was just wonderful too! Please, please, write more West Wing.

That was a well written fun read. Thank you for a great start to my day.