Oh my goodness. Absolute best thing ever! I think this is one of my fave fanfics. It was so clever, with all the metaphors. The rabbit-hunting and running from a fox and all the metaphors that kept popping up. I just loved it! I love how you portrayed Allen in this fic! And I especially loved rabbit-hunting! just priceless! Could you consider making a sequel? This was just so awesome!

I read this fic a while ago but i became member of very recently so i review it now. It's great! I love this fic! The whole animals metaphor is just great! This fic made me ROTFL XD

Good luck!

Poor Link he seems to always be dealing with a horny Allen XD Also I loved the analogy, especially:

But what I don't get is, why are you asking me this?"

"Because you're the fox's pupil."

"Oh. In that case, it doesn't matter how far the frog runs, because the fox is gonna bite it's ** head off."

Haha, Cross is a dangerous creature! Good thing Allen eventually came to the rescue! Great story, made me laugh a lot ^__^

Great story =)

... YES! Oh my! I love... well... this entire story. Allen was absolutely hilarious, as was cross.

-takes deep breath-
ah... smells like high school, doesnt it? XD
the chaos in this was bloody amusing and ohmygawd the metaphore!! and really now.. Link wasnt all that bad. he was pretty cool with everything. granted, it was only because he was sick of all the workload. but he's still cool. XD

allen seemed to be getting along well with his General in this. kinda cute.

ps: allen has a build-in gaydar. LOL. Epic win!

That was an INSTANT WIN!! Hilarious, I loved it! I'm more of a CrossKomui fan but I still loved this fic, love the devilish Allen and Fou was also awesome. Great job!

LOL
that was awesome!
Baka-Bak and Komui such a cute couple. Good Job xD

no matter how many times i read this fic i cant help but laugh. its absoluetly brilliant. You have them so in character is great. and the animal metaphore are fantastic really

damn i love this fic

LMAO! I loved that metaphore. Absolutly brilliant!

I wonder...are cats more interested in rabbits or dogs?

Haha oh my, that was delightfully funny.
Metaphors are a beautiful thing, no? And you did a wonderful job portraying and making fun of them repeatedly; so I clap that, :claps:
I also enjoyed the OOC Allen. He can't /always/ be a polite lil gentleman :P

/uv nk

OMG ... That pairing .. HOE!

I WUV IT !!

O.O er .. Bak walks in on Lavi + Allen ..

- drols -

Me wanna do that 2 ...

Link should have mentioned the paperwork involving Allen in a sinful homosexual relationship XD

Great fic, hilarious, I love it. The only problem I had was the lack of description since the whole thing reads very much like a script, but the humor makes up for it. I love how the characters were displayed, the conversation between Bak and Fou really had me laughing. Great job!

I have not laughed this hard at a fic in a long time, and never so much at a DGM fic. I laughed so much and so loud that I woke my dog and had my mother yell at me from the other room to "Hold it down." This really was above and beyond anything I've read in this fandom. My only beef with it is the tiny grammatical and spelling errors -- they're not prominent, but they make the whole thing a little messy and sloppy. Just an FYI. I'm pretty nitpicky about those kinds of things, of course, but I noticed a bunch of small typographical errors.

I especially adored how you managed to capture Allen's sneaky side. He's not the weepy uke so many people like to make him out to be. He's Cross Marian's pupil, and he knows how to get what he wants. And the animal analogy was brilliant.

I salute you; this fic is absolutely amazing.

...lol! XD