Somehow, I can see that happening... I think it holds much more beauty than it may seem to for the first glance, as it fits with the One Piece magic very well, a peaceful collection of surprises... "Surprises" that aren't really shocking, though alwyas capable of amazing people and making them content... Very nice)

Your quite confusing. I admire your views and find them amusing yet still confusing. In fact I find all ff authors confusing. Or maybe it's just the rest of the world that I find confusing for how could they not see all these undiscovered geniuses hanging around on this site. How could they pass these undiscovered talents off as mish mash. Then again the people on here make no move to become know. I'm quite sure several people on here can become the next Stephen King or write the next Harry Potter. But I'm also glad that they are only on here for me to hoard and enjoy. Anyway sorry if this slightly creeps you out or something. Just wanted to tell a complete stranger what I always thought. Really enjoyed all your story's by the way. Keep on writing yeah.
Cya
A soontobepirate

A nice piece of prose, and bittersweet. Fix a couple of spelling/grammatical errors and it'll be perfect.

THATS RIGHT!oops, caps were on...

love your fics

they are AWESOME

aww it was good. *hugs you* I cried a little because when ever i read (or even write) something with a end to the One Piece story i cry a little. XD Can't wait to read more of your stories.

wow, that was nice. you turned the nprmal cliche topic into something different. Nice change. I never imagined it like that. It realy seens like something Luffy could do.

This is great!