Fantastic, I'm so curious as to what you have planned. Though i was a little put off by the vomit, the over-all story has been fantastic. Please update soon.

A very readable, and likable reading. Thank you for sharing this today. Have a very enjoyable weekend. So keep smiling, and be happy. :-)

Great chapter, and somehow I doubt Jareth will ever be able to get Sarah to do what he wants!

I love your style of writing! So elegant, so lyrical, so flowing, and wonderful. Hope you update soon.

This has been interesting to read. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)

I really liked this chapter - though I can't figure out where this is going. I can see that you've categorized this story as Angst/Drama, so perhaps there won't even be any romance, I gather?

Enjoyed how you described the ripping of the dress - I could see it happen all the way through.

What the heck is Jareth's motive? He wants to break her for revenge? That's it? Hm... please update soon.

Quite an interesting chapter, and I look forward to reading the next!

An interesting, and enjoyable chapter though I wonder just what was in that book in Jareth's library!

*snicker* I'm curious about what she decided to write. Oh these two are nicely at it indeed!

Excellent portrait of depression and of the strange clarity that can clear it away. Well narrated!

This has been very interesting to read. Thank you for sharing it today. Have an interesting weekend. Keep smiling. :-)

Great chapter, and I am curious as to what Sarah wrote. As well as how Jareth will take her response to his!

That was interesting. Keep smiling. :-)

Great chapter! I believe in the next Sarah will be back inside the Goblin Castle!

This story is really good. I do hope you are still writing it. I'd love to know how it turns out. The characterizations are quite good and it seems a fairly fresh plot. I'd really like to read more! Thanks for this. -Clare