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| Akari-Chan77 2008-09-15 ch 8,  | abuseOH GAWD BALTHIER! XD XD XD |
| Vieraheart15 2008-09-14 ch 8, | abuseMy little brother with the similar story saw this chapter. He's irked about the repainting of the Strahl. I'm trying to assure him nobody took his idea, and get the heck back to his Runescape story where he actually is making me laugh. |
| lolitadoll1203 2008-09-11 ch 7, | abuseLOL! Balthier, you playa! |
| Akari-Chan77 2008-09-08 ch 7, | abuseEW! *screams girly scream* I- he- you - women- the dirty- EW!! *shudder* Good update...ew... |
| ScoobyxBlake 2008-09-08 ch 1, | abuseinteresting |
| Vieraheart15 2008-09-07 ch 7, | abuseKupo... that was a little disturbing. Of course, considering my issues (much worse. Don't ask. Only mentioning because... I don't know why) I should be amused. And I am, a little. I liked how he immediately went after a Viera. |
| Akari-Chan77 2008-08-07 ch 6, | abuseNO! Honest I can't wait. That should be great! Fran's Diary LOL. Wait...that sound familiar... |
| Akari-Chan77 2008-08-07 ch 5, | abuse“For the last time, Balthier I’m not gay!” LOLZ. I liked this chapter. Good Job! :) |
| Vieraheart15 2008-08-06 ch 6, | abuseCockroaches actually aren't asexual. The females just need to mate once and they keep reproducing for the rest of their lives. Aphids however... Never mind. I'm just amused that you posted twice in one day. gives me something to read. |
| Vieraheart15 2008-08-06 ch 5, | abuseIt wasn't that long a wait. My alerts have been odd these days. Usually I get an alert before the chapter is up, now... lucky if I get it at all. |
| Leopardgecko96 2008-08-06 ch 5, | abuseAwesome. I liked the part where they're listing things of departments/jobs he could do. |
| lolitadoll1203 2008-07-25 ch 4, | abuseBalthier and Fran are just like Bonnie and Clyde. They are a badass couple! I'm lookin' forward to reading more of this. |
| Vieraheart15 2008-07-25 ch 4, | abuseThat reminds me of something in my sister's Fran Goes on Jerry Springer where Fran shoves a carrot up Mjrn's... woman part. Great, now I'm laughing. |
| Vieraheart15 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseYes! Nobody messes with Viera and gets away with it, ha ha! |
| Akari-Chan77 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseGO FRAN! WHOOT! WHOOT! Fran is definately one of my favorite characters and she can kick some major butt! Good job! |