WOW I love this story so far (:
Your writing is brilliant!
Update,please? :D

NICE!

This is wonderful! More please!

Keeps getting better! I especially loved the part where Alice happened upon the trees. Beautiful!

Very lovely, so far. I can't wait to read more.

Very very iteresting. You should continue!

I must say… I’m impressed. Just a few favs:

“My bare breasts were being gazed upon with heavy eyes.” An opening line that will easily grab anyone’s attention! Haha. You have to find out what happens next.

“Such a purely white room held such sin. But I had not commited crime. Nor had I gone insane. Cutting myself was only a brief moment in time where I needed to prove I was still alive in this wretched asylum.” I loved this. It explained Alice’s circumstance in such an articulate manner. You suddenly feel for her and understand her indifference.

“Sometimes before bed I would crawl under my sheets and close my eyes tight enough to see colors. I eventually learned how to imagine I was somewhere else where fields of green held nothing but beautiful daisies and red tulips.” I can’t explain what it is that I liked about these particular lines. But I did! I guess it’s because this is something we can all relate to. It makes Alice relatable and somehow accessible despite her situation.

This is excellent work and I can’t wait to see more from you! Love, love, love it! Kudos, MadHatter.