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AMAZING! So much feelings flowed in, they were real. I really cried at the Sev-Lily memories. *sigh* Great job!

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Definitely an interesting take on Snape :) I still love the Lily/Snape twist at the end of TDH (with Snape's memories). I didn't see THAT coming.

Nice writing.

Snape, you little poo head. I hated you during the last six books and then the seventh came and then I understood you. Still a poo head, though.

(Is talking to an imaginary character a tell-tale sign of onset craziness?)

Fantastic writing and characterization, as always!

This is really good! I like your writing, it makes sense and is easy to follow. Don't think that your writing is bad because it is not. Keep writing! :)

A very interesting and poignant take on Snape's feelings regarding Harry. Beautifully written. I think you have developed quite a bit as a writer since I first read your fanfic The Meaning of the Lilyflower.

Well done! You are holding my interest quite magnificently at the moment!

GG x

omg love it!

I think that was a very in-character insight into how Snape might think. Got a bit rambling towards the end, but overall, very good.

Neehee, I've always loved Snape's character.

this was great! I loved it!