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manic the hedeghog
2009-02-25 . chapter 6
update soon ^^ u have me hooked ^^
Kiashi Sirius
2008-12-03 . chapter 6
I lurves it! Good job! And I know its annoying to say this, but please update before like 2 months pass. Is that enough time? (I've read too many fics where the author leaves you on a cliffy(Grr...evil cliffhangers) then doesn't update for over a year or more)I know how hard it is to actually finish a multi-chapter story so I bow to you and give you a virtual humungo tub double fudge brownie ice cream. :D Oh, and MERRY CHRISTMAS!
spiralgal
2008-11-29 . chapter 6
OMG!! They lost Sasuke, and it's only the sixth chapter!! Will Naruto really have to wait until the very end to see Sasuke again?! That would be pure torture for Naruto!

Likey, likey, please continue. Ja ne.
yaaaaaaayme
2008-11-15 . chapter 6
in response to the review response: i do like it, i'm just a bit of a grammar-nazi sometimes! ^.^
britachisbride
2008-11-04 . chapter 6
i thought you quit this story i am so gratfull that you havent thank you your number one fan
UkeNaruto
2008-11-02 . chapter 6
eu~! *big blue eeys* i never thought i would enjoy a naruo crossover with harry potter, but i do thanks you your awesome story! :D can't wait for more x]
Nebelkind
2008-11-01 . chapter 6
Well then! I´m waiting for more!
thought sometimes the things that happen are a little sudden (for example Harry doesn´t really has a reason to ask that question about Sasukes worst part of his live..)
^^
keep up writing!
marinav92
2008-10-19 . chapter 6
oh great great chappy :O
stupid orochimaru ¬¬ i hate him u.u but who not xD

well i liked it a lot :DD
bridie radcliffe
2008-10-16 . chapter 7
you have broken my heart i thought that this thing was awsome to oh well i guess i will have to up withg the ending hope you dont mind bye bye i welcome the anbue to hogwarts biggest fan
bridie radcliffe
2008-10-14 . chapter 7
please add the next chappter this is just so funny and sweet it rely helps me ignore the pain im in so hurry up with next chapter
xXxAuraOfTheSandxXx
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
I know its hard to start a fanfiction that everyone will like but please please please read what you put in the letter from Dumbeldore. It's platform 9 3/4. Not platform 9 1/3. Other than that the story's plot is realy good so far.
Nebelkind
2008-09-02 . chapter 7
;.; Please try to continue! You could allways rewrite or alternate it.. or something like that?
Well please try!
DarkKitsune18
2008-09-01 . chapter 7
Aw T.T

I really liked it so far... oh well, nothing i can do to make you continue is there? =[

Well, good story. Thanks for writing it =]
IDK aka CJ
2008-08-20 . chapter 5
update soon!
i...HATE...tcb s...makes...me...mad...URGH
Belladonna-Isabella
2008-08-16 . chapter 5
I am sorry to say it but it was not one of your best chapters. It wasn’t terrible, or bad, or anything like that, but something wasn’t quite right about it, in comparison to the previous ones.

It felt a bit rushed and the arrival of the other people (Shikamaru, Ino ect) was a bit out of place, there was no valid reason for that.

I do not have any objections about the ninja’s attending the ball but the whole thing, as presented, only served to take the characters further away from their objective, which is to guard Hogwards. They didn’t act like guards or ANBU at all, like they are supposed to be.

Also, in my opinion, the situation with the transformed Sasuke didn’t really fit and he was somewhat OCC in this chapter. In general, I have observed that all of them tend to appear more child like than they should. They are supposed to be a lot more mature for their age, due to the things they have gone through. Sasuke and Naruto have gone through some very difficult situations and some of those, when remembered should still affect them and even hurt them.

However, I thought that the ending had certainly an interesting twist and I would like to add that everything I have said are just my opinions on things concerning this story. Despite my objections and observations I really like this story and only make comments that I think can help you make it even better, but you are by no means obliged to act on them. Either way, I will keep reading this story because I do enjoy it.

Regards,
Bella~
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