ah you rock :D

The writing works very well-simplistic, sparing, and to the point. There are some questionable uses in language, but if it were written stylistically, it wouldn't be such an engaging story.

So good! well done you!

i enjoyed this story...but do you really expect me to believe diana stayed in that chair nearly a month? what did she eat? how did she go to the bathroom? and how could she christian "get it on" later when she had broken ribs? ouch! sorry, i'm just a nitpicker at heart)

Hey, I have an idea for the 3rd set! I think you should write a prequel...I'd like to know about Diana's David...

Just a little historical fact: Toulouse died in 1900.

omg omg omg omg, dont leave me hanging! haha! i cant wait till your next chapter, ill be biting my nails until then, great sotry so far

luv, em

Great fun (as was your previous Moulin Rouge piece), but if you kill off Diana, I couldn't forgive you. Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

Once again, I like this story, but do you think they really used the words "fucking" and "bitch" in the early 20th century?

Wonderful! Keep going, I'm on the edge of my seat! A tad confusing, but otherwise nice writing, straightforward and perfect for the story!)