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Black Ace 0
2010-01-06 . chapter 5
TO FAVE
Black Ace 0
2010-01-06 . chapter 1
TO FAVE
waterblade
2010-01-01 . chapter 4
I just figured it out, you got the idea for the mask from Bleach and may I please use the mask and Ribcage Missiles because sometime in the future I'm going to start another naruto fic and give NAruto the Shikotsumyaku and right now I have an oc that has the Shikotsumyaku and I want to make him stronger so he's a good challange against Naruto in his sage mode and I have a demon army somewhat thought up and I want one of them to have control over his bones and this is just for a strong demon one of the others I thought of has so much control over sand that it makes Gaara look weak and here's an idea for a female user of the Shikotsumyaku, give her a tank-top so she can use the bone sword thing and may I please use the Finger Bullet Drill: Rapid Fire I think it's called and don't worry I'll give you credit, please reply?
ramenwriter15
2009-11-11 . chapter 6
this chapter was great. Funny as usual. the anko parts were good. funnest part was quote“In Bush We Trust”. Scary, isn’t it? -nice, I totally agree,but who wouldn't. I also get what you mean by people always demanding chapters from you, I get that too. I'll just wait paitently, like I ant people to wait for me. Once again great chapter. kisame made me laugh. your a good writer
omally-dood
2009-11-07 . chapter 6
wa that's all there is i am so disappointed so get righting and post some more (or else)
also...
I feel sad now ☹ poor kisame all he wanted to do was see the cool sharks (disappointment I know how that feels)
That’s not funny poor kid all he wanted 2 do was feed the baby animal
(what’s fucking rough with u none of that is funny of amusing it’s just sad) well except 4 the futurama dream that made me chuckle but still that is so sad (it just breaks your hart a little)
Now with that being said the Mr. Potter penguin’s reference is a little funny so I forgive u
Hitlist of Doom
2009-10-04 . chapter 4
Great fic I can't wait for more also I'm starting to get the immpression that these mirror omakes are pieces from other stories and it would be really cool if you would put up the names of all the ones you have used and the current one either in your author's notes or on your homepage thanks;
UPDATE SOON!!
Djinn Crimsora
2009-09-26 . chapter 6
I honestly cannot describe how interesting and awesome your BEMB series is turning out.

Keep up the excellent work and just remember to check over your work for errors before publishing it.
chidori90
2009-09-05 . chapter 6
It was pretty good for that matter.
bumike99
2009-09-05 . chapter 6
Good update
jesi ki kage
2009-09-04 . chapter 6
that omake was great! please keep up the good work and... well i would say keep the cliffhangers coming but thats way to much suspense!!1
colin
2009-09-04 . chapter 6
Nice a little more lenght would be nice but the Omakes are funny. Update again soon.
aeae
2009-09-04 . chapter 6
wow... so Gara's going to save the day right?
the omake was awsome! i cant wate to see what happens next
Shizha
2009-09-04 . chapter 6
Finally you update! I was afraid you abandoned this fic, and without this, the NarutoxRin community loses 40% of it's awesomness! I love you man, but not in that way. Good luck, and try to spend some more time on BEMB, 'kay?

Seiichi, iShunpo
mask of the end
2009-09-02 . chapter 6
Yay update!
call sign FireFly
2009-09-01 . chapter 6
lol, I love the mirror world Omake's. - FireFly
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