UPdate NOW.

*Sends for Oreius*

PLEASE UPDATE!

Keep writing it =)
Apparently there hasn't been an update since May? tsk tsk

Oh, this is gorgeous.

I've always enjoyed your Peter and Edmund, but I think this is the first time I've fallen in love with your rendition of Susan. She's fantastic here, truly the Queen she's meant to be in Narnia, and taking up Peter's slack without hesitation when he needs it of her. I love the bit between her and Aslan. I think she was the one we never saw in the books or movies having private conversation with Aslan, so it was wonderful to see it here.

Peter does get a little emotional when he thinks anyone in his family is being threatened, doesn't he? Very good chapter.

Wow... They really DID think Ed died, didn't they? Crud... That's so sad... Ugh...stupid tears...you're a curse, I tell you... Just kidding, of course!

Gosh... Peter really doesn't give himself much of a break, does he? :C It's a good thing Susan slapped him that hard! I'm so glad Aslan came!! ^_^

As always, this was absolutely, incredibly, unbelievably indescribable!! Rock on!! ^U^ *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

It is good to see the other side of the story. I find Susan's POV especially interesting (quite unusual). Please update! =]

Wonderful. So glad to see a new chapter. Really enjoy this story and it's companion. You have a real gift for capturing the spirits of the characters. Can't wait for more.

I'm totally pouting because my favorite story isn't in that list of ones you'll update but... I'M REALLY glad you're updating these!! I've been waiting for this moment since I heard about it in keeping the faith! I'm so glad I got to see it. Peter guilt is always fun. Hope you update again soon!
Thanks for writing,

Wildfire

Thank you for bringing Peter back to his senses, can't wait for more :) I hope your strategy of writing one chapter per story works for you, writers block is a horrid affliction.

Great chapter. Poor Peter and Susan.

Oh! Please next chapter soon? This was *very* good.

great chapter! it's getting so exciting! i do hope that peter and susan reunite soon with lucy and edmund. i liked the part when susan almost fell and peter pulled her back against his chest and arms wrapped around her waist. I liked the line:

"Peter hadn’t been Peter—their Peter, this Peter—since leaving the Professor’s home six months ago."

so sweet. i can't wait until the next chapter! update soon please! =)

I almost knew what to expect in this chapter, which was a good thing because I couldn't wait to see how it would be written update soon please.

Wow, I'm glad that you updated this, it was so good. I love how Susan was so calm and yet strong and determined in getting Peter to realize how things were with Aslan.

I love how you bring Peter back to how he was before. Very well done on that.

They finally found their way that Edmund and Lucy went, and of course they found the bow. I'm so glad that they found the Telmarine. Him saying those words was just how it should be.

Great job. Can't wait for more.