Okay for the stern pep-talk at the bottom. Good story.

Poor Hikari. She went through all that trouble to get Shinji to get her, when she could have just done it herself. This is probably one of the more adorable of the Ikarishipping fics that I have read so far.

~PikaPie~

I love this, I love this, write another one.

yay im smiling now
:D

this was cute :-)

Aww, cute! And funny! I can see Hikari and Shinji acting like that, too!

GAWD! that was so good1 great job!

poor Hikari! All she wanted as simple kiss and Shinji just had to go and tease her like that! Lol, at first i thought Hikar iwas just going to throw him down and kiss him by force XD

Anyways, I love this story! The two are very much in charatcer and its very sweet! I can't wait to read your next ikari fic! I'm sure it'll be great like this one!

Wow... An IkariShipping fic that is in-character and well-written? Plus it's really cute and funny, too.

Good job with all of Hikari's reactions by the way, and Shinji teasing her was great. "The H-word..." Hahaha.

lol, it was so cute.

'He used the H-word.'

i loved it, fantastic^^