Hey, Did u give up the story?It'd be a pity.

Please update!

Are you serious, why in the hell would you make Harry so Gulliable, i kno he's gulliable in the cannon version, but not that Gulliable, why in the hell would Harry actually even think about Max if she were a death eater, and all this is after Dumbledore died?

Nice Chapter, keep going! :D

good chapter, keep going!: D

Good chap, keep going! :D

Cool idea and keep up the good work as I am enjoying the story. Thanks for writing.

Well it seems the action will begin. Keep going! :D

Nice chapter, keep going! :D

I enjoyed reading this and please update soon thanks.

great

Nice chapter, i'm interisting to see draco's reaction.

Keep goinG! :D

good chapter but someone has to call out bullshit because not everybody is this stupid and harry needs to take his head out the clouds because he's starting to abandon all reason and he might as well be smoking the weed because in this it seems like he loses all rational thought at this point when it comes to max so i wanna see what happens and keep writing this is getting good.

nice story keep it up

A cute chapter,update fast ;D

Will it be Harry/Max a romance, or just friendship? Will she be in the end with malfoy? I'm not into Draco/Max relationship, it'll be more interesting a harry/max ship i that is just my suggestions.

Keep going!:D