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| Natalie 2008-08-21 ch 10, anon. | abusenice chapter! I like where your going in the flashbacks with a mini nathan/haley/chris triangle!! that would be fun to read! I bet hale y is going to talk to him about what happned all those years ago between him and his dad! |
| Maaiik87 2008-08-20 ch 10, | abusegreat chapter! im really curious why haley wanted to talk to nathan! the story is still pretty mysterious, but i like it. i like to read how we get to know more about them trough the chapters! its better than all in once. cant wait for the next chapter! please ud soon! |
| LiZ457 2008-08-20 ch 10, | abuseplease update asap!! |
| superkawaiiKokonutprincess 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseloved the flashbacks, A jealous nathan is always fun to read. I wish all these ppl woud just leave naley alone. taylor and lucas are filling her head with doubt. I hope that their talk goes ok and that haley doesn't shut him out. I mean if she needs to shut someone out, let be trent. Poor haley, must be so confused one minute they are "friends" again and the next he is shutting her out again...I blame Lucus. Brooke dragging anyone shopping is always hilarious. I am anxious to find out what happened b/w naley, so pls update soon. |
| brecue 2008-08-19 ch 10, anon. | abuseWell, I am lovin this story. All your stories are good but they continue to getter better and better. I love the flashbacks. You incorporate them so well and you keep it very interesting. I think you are a very talented writer! I look forward to your new chapters...keep up the great work! |
| Hush Hush Looks 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseIt's a good thing that Haley and Nathan are going to talk. Although I have a feeling that it's not going to be much of a nice chat. After what Haley and Taylor talked about, it'll probably be a little different than that. Either way, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Please post more soon. Thanks. :) |
| shenova 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseCor Nathan is reeally going through it at the moment, he isn't being the nicest person in the world but he seems to have a lot going on in his head and I think he is bottling it all up. I can understand why he doesn't really have anyone to talk too and he can't tell Haley as he is scared to be around her as he broke her heart once and he doens't want to do it again. Haley seems to be going around in a daze aswell with all her thoughts going around her head. It's good that she can talk to Taylor about it as she couldn't say anything to Brooke could she? I am looking forward to the chat between Haley and Nathan but I don;pt know if it is going to be good news for Nathan or not. even if she does want to be friends will Nathan be able to go with it or will he say it's better not to. Update soon. |
| OTHfan923 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseoh make them hook up naley style already :) lol. just kidding, your writing is PERFECT AND I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| SharonAnn 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseI liked the flashbacks but I can't wait to see how Haley and Nathan's conversation goes. Update ASAP! |
| ashly815 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseNo! Haley don't tell him you can't be friends! Damn it! I hope i'm wrong about what she wants but after her talk with Taylor, I don't know. I understand that she's been hurt by him before though. And we don't even know how bad it was for her...are what were they when he left? Tell us...please. It just seems like they were in love. Plus, if she was messed up that bad...someone was in love. Lucas, Taylor, and Trent are all on my list! And they are under Naley haters...lol. I hope Chris Keller stays away in those flashbacks. Brooke and Haley shopping was priceless. You can always count on Brooke for a good laugh. But my favorite line of the whole chapter. “It’s not so much about the wearing. It’s more about the tearing off.” Classic Brooke! Please, please, please let me be wrong about her wanting out of his life because of the past. He just needs to take her and kiss her like there's no tomorrow. But I feel like this Nathan will just stand there and take it because he thinks he deserves it! But he doesn't because he's changing, can't she see that? You're killing me! Please update soon! Please! |
| iene 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abusecant wait 2 read next chap! |
| naley19 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseAWESOME CHAPTER. CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. UPDATE SOON! |
| naley19 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abuseLOVED THE NALEY AND THE TIME THEY SPENT WORKING TOGETHER. DID LUCAS HAVE TO BE SO MEAN? POOR NATHAN. |
| SeRa.RoCkS 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseI've always loved a jealous Nathan, and this one is no exception. I love that he was still in denial about he feels for Haley and he was so busted when he was jealous. I still wonder how they got together though, from that kind of friendship to an actual relationship, and then ended breaking up. I also love the Brooke/Haley friendship you have here. I've always loved their friendship on the show, and it's no different, if not more awesome here. Although I kind of wish Nathan wasn't avoiding Haley. I know things between them are far more from "okay" but it's sad that Haley has no idea why he's ignoring her. It must be ** her because they were just getting to the point when they're friends. I hope their talk would work things out! As usual, awesome, amazing job and I can't wait for the next update! |
| emmalou2704 2008-08-19 ch 10, | abuseLoved this chapter - wonder what Haley is going to say to Nathan... please update soon! :) Your writing is amazing! Keep it up! :) |