OMG you have to carry on! I wonder if it will turn out like parent trap - where twins are seperated and bring parents back together haha anyway it's really sad at times and I hope that susan and caspian will be together soon with their children.
Please write soon!

awee,
that's not a good ending to stop at.
please continue on.
i want to know what happens!

x

NNO Su should take both bundles of joy back to Narnia and live a happy life with Caspian

well thats sad.. i hope that Susan will change her mind and go back to live with Caspian and BOTH her kids:)

Great chapter!

okay this chapter was amazing and totally sad. twins, yay! but it's sad that Sue is separating them. but anyway great chapter :D loved it so much!

cool. XD

loved it, and twins yay! But why Jeremiah? why not Rilan, then again ignore me your the writter:)

this was a good chapter! that is cool that see had a boy and a girl. you said in previous chapter that caspian had changed course to go look for her. will he eventuually find her? if and when he does can he change her mind? or will her decision stand firm? i hope that he can convince her to go back with him to raise their family together. is she the only one he has to convince? or will it be her mother as well?

will he get to see both of his children?

the names were really nice. surprised she didn't name the boy after his father. but itt cold alwasy be a middle name. or did she not cause it would be too painful for her?

keep up te good work.

Susan and Caspian need to be together to take care of their kids. please make her change her mind. Please update it seen i want to see what happens.

Aw, poor babies. They need to know Caspian. And doesn't he need a male heir? Ah well, new traditions!!

Write more! PLZ? Renesmee Cullen101

Love this story

I like this story so far...it's my first narnia story, I've loved the movies but only just started reading these today.
Well done.
:D

can't wait for next chapter please update soon :D x x