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| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-08-23 ch 6,  | abuseDid I see little allusions to Alphonse Elric and Lt. Hawkeye in there...? If so, THANK YOU! Especially for having Alphonse! Oh, and BRILLIANT CHAPTER! I already can't wait for the next one! Good luck! ~ GoldenTalesGeek P.S. Feel free to use my idea from a few reviews ago of Axel and Roy Mustang duking it out with their fire powers. I don't think I'll be using it anytime soon in any of MY fanfics... lol |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-08-19 ch 6, | abuseI laughed so hard at Xigbar installing guns on his motorcycle! Great chapter, can't wait for more! |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-08-04 ch 5, | abuseWEWT! Leaxaeus the demon ghost! XD Awesome hilarious chapter, and Donald and Goofy sueing Namine, pure genius! |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-08-02 ch 5, | abuseDonald and Goofy suing Namine?! Messed up, but funny as hell! Good luck with the next one! ~ GoldenTalesGeek |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-07-29 ch 4, | abuseThis is, by FAR, the best chapter yet. From things as random as Xigbar's never-explained fight with a salamander, to the boss whose name is never spoken, to the awesome cliffy ending! So hilarious, keep it up! |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-07-26 ch 4, | abuseBrilliant chapter! Hm... I gotta wonder who the manger of Zaxmart is...? Oh, well. It continues to get good! I look forward to the next one! Good luck! ~ GoldenTalesGeek P.S. I'm still pleased that Edward Elric is a part of the story! I still want Alphonse and maybe some other FMA characters to show up. For instance, it'd be AWESOME to read about a pyro-battle between Roy Mustang and Axel! |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-07-25 ch 3, | abuseHow random, but HILARIOUS! As the search begins, hilarity ensues! Cannot wait for the next chapter! |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-07-23 ch 3, | abuseMan, oh man, is it GETTING GOOD! I look forward to the next chapter soon! Good luck! ~ GoldenTalesGeek P.S. I know your opinion on comic book movies, but I'm gonna foist this on you all the same: GO SEE "THE DARK KNIGHT"! IT IS AWESOME! THE JOKER IS INCREDIBLE! |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-07-16 ch 2, | abuseStill hilarious! My favourite part had to be Larxene demanding Demyx be a secretary! It was awesome! |
| Firestorm Studios 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is actually a great concept for a story, I loved it! Hilarious! I especially loved the part about the ghost of Lexaeus haunting the corridors! XD |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-07-15 ch 2, | abuseAs the Doctor would say, "That's just BRILLIANT!" :D Man, this is getting good, as Edward Elric's showing up...! Keep up the great work! And get Alphonse to show up, too! Good luck! ~ GoldenTalesGeek |
| Mii-chan loves youu 2008-07-14 ch 2, | abusethis is very funny. i hope poor Roxas gets a job! and hopefully Axel will stop burning things? haha. well written except for some parts, but it's ok. Very good story line (better than anything i could come up with). i'm putting this on alerts so i can read on! --Mii-chan-- |
| GoldenTalesGeek 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat premise! The Organization always struck me as having near-infinite funding. Glad to see this isn't the case... lol Keep up the good work! ~ GoldenTalesGeek |