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Reviews for: Broken Wings
morgman
2009-08-26 . chapter 16
Aw, If I may borrow from the wisdom of Ty Lee, this story is just like a puffy cloud - Poof. After reading this one, my aura's gone all pink and fluffly.
It's still a great story but, even if Katara was a bit naughty. Great work.
Silvereyes12
2009-08-22 . chapter 13
Mai is so cool!!
go-sullivan
2009-01-17 . chapter 14
Well Katara is quite the differently abled person magnet. First Toph now Ty Lee.

Me thinks though that this has something to do with the way Ty Lee cared about Azula.
go-sullivan
2009-01-17 . chapter 10
Aw. Jeez. Poo Ty Lee. It occurs to me that she is the creative type. She could totally learn how to play an instrument...

Looking forward to see how you play this out.
go-sullivan
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Geez Poor Ty Lee. I knew she loved Azula. Why can't Toph see that.
ZombieZapper101
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Wow! Simply wonderful opening! Keep this up! For i like this story!

ZombieZapper 101
Heart-san's wolf
2008-08-20 . chapter 16
This story was great...i was scared it was a katara/tylee there 4 a minuet...you did a great job!
Bitter Failure
2008-07-27 . chapter 16
Chips of bone... floating around in spines DD: Oh God. The thought alone hurts.

The kiss thing was random, but cute. Interesting potential pairing o_o

Mm. I'm feeling more and more sorry for Ty Lee. Can't wait for the next part ^^
ChipFest
2008-07-14 . chapter 16
Aw, they smooched and made up :D
But Toph didnt say she loved Katara back...? hm...
next instalment?! -rubs hand together eagerly- bring it on!!
GREAT STORY. ^O^
Cheers,
Chip~
RueBroadway
2008-07-14 . chapter 16
Wow, Ty-Lee's kiss caught me off gaurd too.
Katara and Toph reunion was perfect!
"How can an earthbender bend so much fire?", my favorite line of the story.

I am amazed of the speed in which you have got these stories out. It's amazing.

I also have to thank you for the wonderful distraction from "Zutara" week. I usually don't complain about the ever popular fandom, but I'm afraid that the flooding of Zutara stories has been drowning great ones like yours!

Looking forward to that sequel you're talking about!
ChipFest
2008-07-13 . chapter 12
ooh, so Katara is gonna spil the beans tomorrow to Sokka. It will be interesting to see how he takes it :D
Good ol' Sokka...lol
And Poor Ty Lee. Banished from her home. Guess she kinda -did- deserve it, though. Silly girl.
I am wondering why this story in 'M' when the prequel was only 'T'? Are you planning on putting in more mature content later on?
Hope you can update soon! This story has me well and truly hooked :D
Cheerio,
Chip~
RueBroadway
2008-07-13 . chapter 10
This was an intense chapter. My eyes couldn't read fast enough.
Bravo, again, for Mai and Ty Lee's character. I'm with Toph in looking forward to the outcome of Mai's talk with her husband.
Can't wait for the next chapter :o)
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