oy. that was...er...interesting...(EXPLAIN)

Scarey! So far it looks like Heero, Duo, Zechs, and Wufei are gladiators of sorts. Maybe not, I am not all that good at guessing these things. Still, this is very good! I love the detail that you are putting into the story! The description is GREAT! I am looking forward to more.

Whoops! Uploaded wrong chapter! Sorry!

Um, there is nothing in part two. Well, not exactly *nothing*. I mean the title, your name and "Part 1.2: Void" is here, but nothing else. Might want to try and fix that. I do want to know what is going to happen.

Very nice. You have a lyrical quality to your writing (which always scores well with me) and I happen to enjoy the "rambling" style that you attach to your pieces.

A little strange, but in a good way. I like it! The dream, no, the description of the dream by Heero was very well done! I am looking forward to more!