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Dragomir
2008-09-05 . chapter 10
*bows* Thank carlisle for you and your amazing writing! It took me awhile to catch up on the chapters I missed, but they were all worth it, defenitely great to read when you have a cold :D

Anyway focusing on just this chapter, I especially loved this part; "Her life is timeless. A thousand years have passed — a thousand more will. She’s seen it all, heard it all, learned and experienced and endured it all. The future lies before her like a well-worn page, memorized from beginning to end, dog-eared corner to ink spot of blue, known like she knows herself and the reoccurring dream (nightmare) of her forever life." It defenitely made my heart swell, and helped with my disappointment of BD.

oh! one last thing (God this is long lol!) I decided my favorite chapter was chapter eight, your "attempt" at humor was a win!

The REAL Alice Cullen ^_~
Totally Kawaii
2008-08-31 . chapter 10
Wow... these drabbles were gorgeous and utterly riveting. I find myself starting to ship Tanya/Edward because they are so right... except I already have Tanya/Rosalie to ship. xD Please keep going... they really are wonderful.
karathomas08
2008-08-31 . chapter 10
i hate tanya
Fearless2write
2008-08-09 . chapter 9
Aw. I love this one. I am NOT a Tanya fan, but I am glad that he wishes that he could forget her. I am also glad that Steph made Tanya the good girl in BD and wrote the parts that she's in with good grace. I probably would have torn my book to shreds if she was all over Edward.
luvscupcakes357
2008-07-24 . chapter 7
i really wish edward had a past with tanya for real. that would make breaking dawn even cuter. keep writing Tanya and edward! love the story
luvscupcakes357
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
OMG! that is soo adorable. i love Edward and Tanya! Keep writing more.
xx.just.a.contradiction.xx
2008-07-23 . chapter 7
WOW.
i think this one was the best one yet!
my goodness.

this is exactly what i pictured happening in BD.
and just wow.. your descriptions are so powerful.

"his skin is like diamonds, like shattered glass."
and
"glowing pale as an angel and glistening like freshly drawn blood"

those two particularly stood out to me.
just.. WOW. lol

:)
anglbby989
2008-07-21 . chapter 6
Oh, she did the noble thing. You sort of got to feel bad for both of them. Edward denying what he sort of feels for Bella, and going to Tanya and trying to make it work with her. And Tanya for knowing how she feels, and deciding to wait another seventy years until Bella passes. I wasn't sure if I was going to like this story very much. It turned out to be quite good. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
Fearless2write
2008-07-20 . chapter 6
I liked that chapter. Oddly. Hm...
Pocket the Great
2008-07-19 . chapter 3
I read this when the chapter came out, but got sidetracked because I wanted to check out the quote, then I saw a link for the trailer, and soon I forgot all about reviewing. I think so far that this might just be my favorite, but I haven't read the 4th or 5th chapters yet, so we'll have to see.
Fearless2write
2008-07-17 . chapter 4
AW! Poor Edward. You know that that is never going to happen right? Oh well, I dream too. I don't think he is lying to Bella though. Then again Steph said that she was going to get clever.
Dragomir
2008-07-14 . chapter 3
YAY! I come home only to see that you've updated & the quote the day is from Tanya! I'm ridculously happy! :)

This chapter was great, I'm really excitied to see what happens next!

The REAL Alice Cullen ^_~
Pocket the Great
2008-07-13 . chapter 2
I completely love this pairing because of you. I can't wait for the third chapter.
Fearless2write
2008-07-12 . chapter 2
holy. crap. that. is. all. i. have. to. say. *teeth are grinding*
Kyoshi7989
2008-07-12 . chapter 2
You're making me luv this, luv this, luv this :) And also giving me a craving for JacobBella. M good...are you gonna put any Jacob/Bella mentions in? 'Cause if you don't want to, that's fine, but y'know. Can't survive without my favorite werewolf :D
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