Lol :)

that was a good story really different a different side of of jake and glad that edward got back to save bella in time

Love this story - thank you!

ok this story! i love how u make it funny yet intense at the same time the story makes the cullens seen more like actual people and a family not just vampires lol i loved the hole thing! great job

please do a sequel this is an amazing story but vamps cant get hurt unless ripped apart or burned

haha trust emmett to do that...glad the bastard got what he deserved...

why did bella tell edward not to hurt jacob coz she loved him when he did that to her, thenwas fine when edward killed him? was it to catch him off guard or something?

yes! die jacob! i really hate him, always have

I thought the ending was great and I am glad that Jacob got what he deserved. Thanks for writing.

Wow! that was amazing! it would be really cool if yhuu posted a small epilogue or sequel about their lives later on... cuz i just cant get enough of yhuur riting

awsome job, thanks soo much...

I love the 'I'm bigger...but I'm prettier' exchange - it made me giggle :)

This was a great ending to a great story! I hope you start another story sometime.

Ugh so one more chapter. I'm anxious!

Love this chapter! They had their lives and then bam, dumbass shows up.

oh my edward

here wolfy, wolfy, wolfy..

heree wolfy, wolfy, wolfy...

*DEATH!*

:D

ilike. more please? like.. soon?

woohoo! go bella! thanks please continue