I love this! It's interesting to see a darker, more grown up Maya. I'm glad that you haven't changed her too much, either. Actually, I'm just happy to see an EdgeworthMaya fic. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially with how you're going to proceed with their relationship. Kudos on keeping Edgey IC. I really hope that you'll update!

Jesus person where the heck are you? This is ridiculously awesome!

Excellent, excellent story so far. If Maya had a brain (or rather, was more like her sister) I can picture her like this! (I feel sorta bad for Maya though...where ever she goes, hell follows. She can never escape being involved in the judicial system!)
The dialouge between Edgeworth and Maya is really entertaining, and the diction is wonderful. Just a great story overall so far. Keep up the good work!

-Psy

SO BRILLIANT!

I love you for writing this! I could almost feel edgeworth's eyes boring into me... scary...

hmm... the only problem is that I can't read more to the story this very second! Oh I am so selfish. Write at your own pace and in your amazing style.
~gyakutard.

omygoodness.Please continue writing. This story is so amazing and your diction porvides for a very vivid fic. I can't wait till you update again!