My eyes were actually watering at that last one. I'm so glad there's some good fanfiction for this beautiful series. Really, all of these were superb.

Very nice!! I love the Firebringer trilogy! I sure hope you continue this! Illishar's point of view was very well written, I like your use of adjictives! You have a few capitlization errors but nothing that bad, also, make sure you never start a sentance with "And" Other then that it was very good! Hope to see some more!

Good Job!

You have written from an interesting perspective, but you did an excellent job, especially with the segment about Ses and Claydor. It really felt like I was reading deleted scenes from the novel. Great work!