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| slimjim27 2008-09-04 ch 19,  | abusegreat story man, i just finnished reading it from chapter 1 to 19, in one sitting, took me 2 hours but it was worth it!! i have an idea for his sword, how about having it incorporate his soul of ice techniqe into his attacks, sorta like the raigin from naruto with it's electrical attacks, and the tessaiga from innuasha with it's wind attacks!! and name the sword jiraishin (iceblade)!! |
| Silver Warrior 2008-09-02 ch 19, | abuseo neat story. I like seeing Ranma/Inu Yasha crossovers, but its so hard to find one well done. and even harder to find one with the proper pairings (actually, rather hard to find a Ranma crossover AT ALL with the proper pairings). |
| rampaging-poet 2008-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI think the sword should be called Kazeryuu, which would mean something along the lines of Wind Dragon. Sorry about submitting this as review on Chapter 1, but I hadn't thought of it when I made my actual review and I didn't know you had private messages disabled... |
| What happened? 2008-09-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseWhere is chapter two? |
| SuzyQ001 2008-09-02 ch 19, | abuseDragons Heavenly Auora but I do not know how it is spelled in Japanesse this is a great story. |
| rampaging-poet 2008-09-02 ch 19, | abuseOk, not what I was expecting. I didn't realize that Sesshomaru no longer carried Tenseiga around with him. Hooray for surprise rituals of awesome from nowhere! This was an excellent chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| The Eternal Newb 2008-09-02 ch 19, | abuseI'd suggest something along the lines of "tsume-ken" or "claw blade" and having the sword fuse into his hands to enhance his cat claws when he sinks into the cat fist. |
| YuriFan5 2008-08-29 ch 18, | abuseNice! Cliffhanger much! Later I will give a chapter by chapter review. |
| wolf40k 2008-08-26 ch 18, | abuseYou, my friend, are a sick bastard. Leave a cliffhanger like that and then saying that the story is on hold, *shakes head* Other then that like the story. |
| rampaging-poet 2008-08-25 ch 18, | abuseThat... was... AMAZING! Working in all of their most powerful moves in a plausible manor, surprise reinforcements, and pulling together a perfect strategy to defeat an opponent that outclassed them all. Oh, and I believe I may know some of what happens next. Then again, I don't actually read/watch much Inuyasha, so I could be wrong... |
| Anime-Freak317 2008-08-25 ch 18, | abuseAh, a diamond-tipped sphere laced with that of a fire-god, a demon-dog, and a mutated freak being touched by the shikon-no-tama. I wonder how this life-threatening injury will effect Ranma. Great chapter. Lookin' forward to the next one. Better yet, Lookin' forward to when Myoga meets Happosai...unless they're one in the same. |
| SeEmYaWeSoMeNeSs 2008-08-24 ch 18, | abuse*dies but cannot complain because that would make me a hypocrite* Crap... CONTINUE! |
| rampaging-poet 2008-08-16 ch 17, | abuseOoh, this could be a problem. Fortunately, Ranma already knows what he's doing and the latest monster of the week won't actually meet him for another five hundred years. Also, I laughed at the theft of the video game and the spiciness of the curry. Great chapter, I can't wait for more! |
| rampaging-poet 2008-08-12 ch 16, | abuseWow, all the romance seems to be sorted out and they managed to injure Naraku. Also, it seems that (Ranma + Kagome) > (Inuyasha + Koga). Great chapters! |
| Lord Edric 2008-08-09 ch 14, | abusefor miroku's reaction a better term would be that he was horrified or mortified. there is also the disgusted with himself route |