 hrmi'nebook 2009-08-13 . chapter 1Could it be that the more liquor Ron consumes, the smarter he becomes? There were some pretty intelligent things there... Good concept, well written, and Lord Ronaldmort is the shiz. |
 Tamira 2008-10-22 . chapter 1*giggles* I LOVE this! Ron sure could be evil... but good he does not try! I mean... as a funny idea to make your best friend and kind of brother feel better it's cool... But in reality? That would SO hurt them all! ... VERY nice little one-shot there! |
 Becca 2008-09-23 . chapter 1 It was nice of Ron to do that for Harry. He must have been feeling a bit useless after Voldemort was defeated.
"I know, but that Ginny's job." I liked that ;p |
 True Queen Of Chaos 2008-09-03 . chapter 1Haha, awesome, Ron's very sweet in this story, I like it!
"That's Ginny's job"
:D |
 stella8h8chang 2008-07-28 . chapter 1Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to reading your fics! This was great. I've just gone back to uni, and I'm feeling rather run-down and heartbroken (we are doing cardiology this term, after all) and this was a highly amusing little pick-me-up.
I liked the way you wove in canon. And fanon, even - I remember the days when we were speculating about anagrams of "Ollivander" (An Evil Lord, for example). I also thought you were quite realistic here, both with regard to the relationships between the adult characters and when you handled the idea of "missing Voldemort".
The only thing I have to critique is when you used the term "damaged" when referring to Harry's children. I know it sounds lame, but I wanted to see "hurt" or maybe "scarred" even. "Damaged" just sounds a bit...like they're objects? I don't know, feel free to ignore me :P
But you've made some very good points here. The main reason many people hated the epilogue was that it was all happy-families and took into account nothing of the horrors of postwar life. This fills in a huge gap - I definitely enjoyed it. |
 Shelomith 2008-07-27 . chapter 1This is FUNNY. I love it! |
 RiverMan 2008-07-20 . chapter 1hey, dude, I like ur story.. Nice and Funny.. |
 excessivelyperky 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Giggles. Yet...there's a seriousness behind it. Lots of soldiers look back at when they were at war, and remember how much simpler life was then. |