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Reviews for: A Twist in Time
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
Amazing! Loving Every Second Of This Story! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! X
sockpuppet82
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
this is good :)
it's nicly well written so far, except I kind of thought that Hermione realized and accepted the whole time travel thing a tiny bit too fast
but it was still great!! :D
next chapter?? ^^
Wistful-Stargazer
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
Very promising beginning.
You can feel her dispare.
I can't wait to see what year Tom is at Hogwarts.
I'm also looking forward to how this story pans out.

I flagged this story for the Alert list.
Lia Francis
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
gut gut gut.
continue plz k thnx!
kausingkayn
2008-07-12 . chapter 1
Like the first chapter. Can't wait to see the second.
Charlotte232
2008-07-12 . chapter 1
what a nice man! :D
i like your fanfic really nice! =)
anon
2008-07-11 . chapter 1
Interesting start, I look forward to seeing the rest of the story. However there are a few minor flaws I would like to address. Canon-wise, Hermione's middle name is Jean, not Jane (an easy mistake, since Jo changed it from the former to the latter in the 7th book). That's very insignificant, though. There are a couple of little grammar mistakes too: for example it should be "they're gone" not "their gone." Also- where is the Knight Bus? Perhaps it hasn't been invented then, which you might want to mention since I would assume it would rescue a stranded witch. Lastly, why would she go to Kings Cross Station? I don't think the Hogwarts Express would run hourly...

Anyway, as I said just a few problems. Overall it seems interesting, and I love the original start of how she got transported back.
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