It was REALLY GOOD.i loved it.Keep more coming!

its funny and wonderfull but where is the rest please up load

awesome

ahahaha i love overprotective jasper
"thats a little too long" haha great job
and the overall story is awseome!
please update soon

i think she says 'dear brother' to much.. otherwise good story

lol the sex talk at dinner was so funny!!

omg soo many girls.

lol Edward must have a death sentence... lol hopefully he'll change his mind on the bet.

OH MY GOSH! :)

ooh Edward is asking for it with the bet... ooh and Emmett with Rosalie.

lol Edward and James getting along? Many spies? LOL can't wait for dinner.

lol so the feelings begin.

tsk tsk tsk sneaky Edward... ooh if he gets caught by Jasper there will be hell to pay.. lol

lol go Bella!!

Aww Anthony sounds like a nice older brother... I wished I had a older brother.

omg Edward.lol at least he knows that he is cocky.. lol

omg Edward is soo a pain in the **.

r u going to continue this story? cuz i think it's pretty good! i was just wondering as you haven't update since march
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