 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 2/22/12 . chapter 8*waves arms chibified* please update soon! evil cliff hangers! ill even help ya if u got a writers block. |
 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 2/22/12 . chapter 6poor eve. makes me want to cry. *huggles her* |
 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 2/22/12 . chapter 5grimmie really sounds desperate. poor puddy cat |
 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 2/22/12 . chapter 4i really like dragon eve. i could almost picture her in my mind along with isshin. lol |
 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 2/22/12 . chapter 3grimmie seems so ooc but yet doesnt if that makes any sense. i loved ichigos confession though |
 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 2/22/12 . chapter 2man eve cant win at all. i feel sorry for her. now if grimmie doesnt start a fight with icchi |
 Neko Hoshi Hime Okami 2/22/12 . chapter 1good first chappie. i really liked it even if grimmie was being a bastard. |
 milotic350 7/2/10 . chapter 8I'm so exited for the next chapter! Please, update soon! |
 XxRikela-chanxX 6/18/10 . chapter 8Everyone is out for poor Eve! *cuddels her* she even sounds adorable, man soul society wanting to bring her in to custody? What are they the police? They have no right! *throws bananas at them* Hear Me Rawr! XP(continue on this ooone D weee)) |
 RedSombrero 5/18/10 . chapter 8OMG! I like your story PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING! |
 milotic350 8/31/09 . chapter 7Please update! Or I shall send flames for not updating but its better than having to wait 8 months for a fanfic to be updated wonderfully. Girr. Oh yeah and more Grimmy please! |
 GrimmjowLovesMeXWatchYourBack 7/8/09 . chapter 6I LIKE very MUCH! write more moRE MORE! pwesse? I'll be your BESTEST friend. And I'll sell you Bleach! no, joking. I don't own them either, sadly enough. makes me wanna cry! |
 GrimmjowLovesMeXWatchYourBack 7/8/09 . chapter 1oh I like this! Grimmjow is such an ass...but I like it! It makes a point, ne? Grimmjow is an ass. (But we have to love him because, hey, he's Grimmjow and his hair is cool. :P) |
 Sasami14 7/5/09 . chapter 1*is left in awe of her artist abilities until she utters
Kon is going to die for sure that night XD
wickedness incarnate is ur pen and yur pencil is sex x love |
 Emerald Gaze 4/27/09 . chapter 5...alittle creepy..but its ok i guess though the whole guilt think seems kinda ooc i suppose the story cant really progress without it.
but theres one more thing i just dont get how this horribly tramitized girl who was sexualy assulted, molested, and almost raped can all of a sudden be fine and walk down the freakin street by herself at night! really shes got a fast recovery rate...5 chaps covering only 2 days but holding a weeks worth of events in its short time span...u hav got one interesting way of writing and thats not necisarrily a bad thing. i after all suck at turning things around for a happy ending i alwaya make things worse darn it!...but it wa good so keep writing!_! |